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Post by cesmith on Oct 24, 2005 7:30:55 GMT -5
Ughhh. I find it hard to believe that it has been almost 2 months since I happily read the super long teaser for chapter 16 in Lee's Breakroom. I know RL keeps you super busy, between work and classes, BUT...
Please,please,please,PLEASE, finish it soon.
It's so much fun playing with this stuff. Ok, now I can go back to normal (?, me? heehee), but please do update.
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Post by kanshu on Nov 7, 2005 1:15:07 GMT -5
Ahhh... sorry! It might take a whole bit longer for me to finish this chapter... But I'm still working on it and have added a short scene for you: A dark patch marked the spot where water drenched the ice. In the center of the rapidly spreading puddle was Gojyo. The backpack covered his upper body, pressed him down into the wet surface. Sanzo stared at his travelling companion, waited for the obligatory string of curses, the trashing and screams for help that should already fill the air. Gojyo lay still, silent and unmoving. "Damn kappa," Sanzo growled. "I don't have time for your stupid games." When only the ice creaked dangerously in reply, Sanzo knew that something was frighteningly amiss. "Oi, get up!" If the fool had managed to injure himself, it would mean another stop, more precious time wasted on Sanzo's way west. Maybe he should just leave Gojyo to his fate. It would serve the lazy fool right, and besides, Sanzo had never wanted the red head to tag along in the first place. 'It's my decision.'Goku's words echoed through his mind, itching and throbbing in the numbness that used to protect Sanzo from the weakness called attachment. Freezing water shimmered the dim light, strands of red hair caught in it supplying an imperfect contrast to the reflectied azure sky... "Shit." There, that's it. Not much, but... you know how it is.
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Post by cesmith on Nov 7, 2005 13:41:58 GMT -5
*sigh* Short, but sweet, and I thank you for the tease.
*hugs* It will do until you have time/are ready to write the rest. I'll look forward to more then.
But like Goku, I will probably whine a little from time to time, it's in our natures. ;D
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Post by youkaineko on Nov 7, 2005 19:28:34 GMT -5
Yay for teases! Thank you! ^^
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Post by Blood_Debt on Nov 8, 2005 2:34:01 GMT -5
You realise what you have done is simply encouraged us to want more? It's like... petting a cat. They always want more (...and then they scratch you!)Meow!
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Post by kanshu on Nov 13, 2005 13:58:24 GMT -5
Well... I've decided to split up 'Abdication' into three parts. You can find part two in the preview version here: www.livejournal.com/users/the_breakroom/6515.htmlConcrit appreciated. The chapter will go online on ffnet once I've gone over it with a less tired mind... Wednesday, perhaps.
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Post by youkaineko on Nov 13, 2005 14:42:01 GMT -5
YAY! Thank you so much for this!!
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Post by cesmith on Dec 13, 2005 9:55:58 GMT -5
purrrpurrrpurrrpurrr....MEOW ;D I know RL is such a pain and keeps you from having enough time to do all the writing you would like to, BUT, that said, I wouldn't be me if I didn't periodically pester and annoy you about teases and new chapters. ;D And besides, I'm dying to see what you will continue to do to all of them.
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Post by kanshu on Dec 17, 2005 19:10:54 GMT -5
Well, RL is a pain in the keister at the moment. I mean, it's almost Christmas and my brain thinks it's like, September or October. And to my shame, I have to admit that I haven't really done much writing outside of hacking manuals into the PC at work... However, since it's the 4th Advent tomorrow, and you groveled asked, here's an extra-long teaser for you. This isn't working, is it? Hakkai shivered. Cold settled in every bone and muscle in as he drained his body of life energy. His legs, numb from the hip down, had ceased to support his weight a long time ago. Too little, too late. Still, Hakkai refused to surrender to reality. Maybe, if he just fought a bit harder, if he squelched that last spark from the core of his being, Goku would... I can't save him. The soft glow of healing energy that radiated from his hands danced before Hakkai's eyes. The blur of light dimmed, flickered a last time and then faded completely. He knew that he had gone way too far beyond his limits. Even his skull splitting headache had become nothing but a faint throbbing in the back of his brain. Goku... I'm sorry. Then Hakkai's world collapsed into darkness and all-numbing cold.
What will I continue to do to them? Well, I know for sure what will happen to Sanzo and Gojyo this chapter. As for the rest... *looks into her goodie bag* ... Mmmhhh... I see toasted testicles, bullet holes, eyes that don't see, death, permanent brain damage, Kanzeon popping a vein, a storm, someone getting a rabies shot, meatbuns, pancakes and a 'closed for renovation' sign... Does that answer your question? ;D
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Post by cesmith on Dec 19, 2005 7:44:33 GMT -5
MMMMM, happy HAPPY sigh and purr. I certainly don't mind groveling, uhm, asking, with those results. Oh, my poor Hakkai. (OH, and everyone else too. ;D) TOASTED??? testicles? (I think I can guess whose.) And a RABIES shot? Bullet holes and vein popping Kanzeon. Sounds like we have quite a bumpy ride in store and one I can't wait to take with them.
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Post by cesmith on Dec 20, 2005 7:39:05 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D Happy Birthday Happy Birthday[/color] Happy Birthday[/color] Happy Birthday[/color]
I hope you have a wonderful day and that your trip home for Christmas is relaxing and safe.
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Post by narrizan on Dec 20, 2005 11:40:16 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D
[glow=red,2,300][/glow] [shadow=red,left,300][glow=red,2,300]HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND A FRUITFUL AND JOYOUS NEW YEAR TOO!
HAPPY HOLIDAYS![/glow][/shadow] much love- zan
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Post by kanshu on Dec 21, 2005 8:27:35 GMT -5
Thanks. Yesterday was a good day, despite all the work. cesmith: Glad you liked the snippet. And you can imagine who'll get toasted testicles? Care to fill me in? ;D
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Post by cesmith on Dec 21, 2005 23:01:08 GMT -5
I can just picture Sanzo getting a little too close to the fire for comfort as he does the AWOOGA dance. ;D And now to ponder the rabies shot...
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Post by cesmith on Jan 4, 2006 23:04:24 GMT -5
I see toasted testicles, bullet holes, eyes that don't see, death, permanent brain damage, Kanzeon popping a vein, a storm, someone getting a rabies shot, meatbuns, pancakes and a 'closed for renovation' sign...I am still pondering the rabies shot, but I'm trying to figure out how I missed the brain damage warning, eyes that don't see and a 'closed for renovations" sign? MY curiosity is killing me. I hope you've had time to write with your busy schedule at work. And maybe there is a tiny teaser to continue to hold us over?
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