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Post by kanshu on Aug 23, 2004 16:31:37 GMT -5
Actually, rewrites happen when your beta returns your chapters, and they look like the editorial chicken has been sacrificed over them. ;D But it's true, now I wnt to make the reast match up to the later chapters, and I would hate myself if I leave plot holes and other nasty issues open. After all, readers are supposed to go beyond the first paragraph (and with that, I'll call it a night, and hope to write more tomorrow.
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Post by Salmastryon on Aug 24, 2004 14:52:29 GMT -5
more!!! more!!! more!!!!
The new chapter was a great pick me up while I've been down with the sinus infection of doom.
Very interested to see where you take the current plot threads.
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Post by kanshu on Aug 25, 2004 1:35:56 GMT -5
Gosh, don't you just love it when your readers sound like a line from a lemon? *snickers* I'm happy you liked it. The next chapter might take a little, because I'm currently reconstructing the Prologue (heavy rewriting going on there at the moment), and chappy 1 needs some refurbishing, too. But if you like plot twists, you'll love the next chapter, because Gojyo will turn things upside down. Including Sanzo. ;D
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Post by Me-Nuriko on Aug 25, 2004 4:10:08 GMT -5
Gojyo is going to turn sanzo upside down? Hm, sounds interesting. ;D
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Post by kanshu on Aug 25, 2004 10:17:09 GMT -5
Hehe... Let's just say, Sanzo pushed his luck. There are some things you just shouldn't do.
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Post by KarotsaMused on Aug 25, 2004 18:02:49 GMT -5
<- I nearly died of laughter from reading that. Oh. Em. Gee. I am looking very much forward to the next chapter, what with all the -TEASING- you're doing
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Post by kanshu on Aug 27, 2004 5:50:06 GMT -5
Oh dear... does that mean I actually have to do evil things to the poor guys? *snickers* I apologize for all the teasing. But I can't help it. I'm a mean person by nature.
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Post by cesmith on Aug 27, 2004 6:38:23 GMT -5
You mean you haven't been doing evil things to them yet? Yeah, right. But keep it up, both the teasing and the evil things. The teasing gives us things to think about, while we anxiously wait for your next chapter, to see what evil things you will put them through.
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Post by kanshu on Aug 28, 2004 12:17:04 GMT -5
I'm very nice and sweet to them. Though, I might start writing on "Simply love" again. Somehow, I feel like doing the next chapter with that neat little 'death' scene in it....
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Post by cesmith on Aug 28, 2004 13:19:17 GMT -5
Ok, now THAT was a great tease. What little death scene are you refering to? Write, Write, Write, but spill some clues first. I miss that story, it was the first one of yours' I read.
Sooo sweet and nice, huh? Only to us, with what you put them through, for our enjoyment and amusement.
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Post by kanshu on Aug 29, 2004 9:25:23 GMT -5
Okay, now you know who isn't dead. Tease enough? ;D And I'm really kind to the characters. There's always a chance for survival.
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Post by cesmith on Aug 29, 2004 10:43:45 GMT -5
ALWAYS A CHANCE FOR SURVIVAL. Oh that sounds like so much fun. Yes, now I know that Sanzo and Gojyo are alive, that leaves the other two. You know me, you can never tease me enough. I always want more, I'm just so greedy.
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Post by kanshu on Aug 29, 2004 15:31:33 GMT -5
LOL! Okay... from somewhere waaay earlier in the chapter: I hope, your hunger is satisfied... if not, I'm afraid you have to wait for the main course, which should be served... sometime next week
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Post by cesmith on Aug 29, 2004 17:03:43 GMT -5
When it comes to your stories, I'm like Goku, I can never get enough. But... if the main course is next week I MIGHT survive.
My poor Hakkai. You've put him through so much, all I can say is MORE.
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Post by cesmith on Aug 30, 2004 1:08:23 GMT -5
I was curious about your Full Metal Panic story, so I went to check it out a few days ago. I know nothing about Full Metal Panic, so I read it as a straight fiction story. I thought it was pretty good. I espescially liked chapter one. It quickly drew me into the story. You could feel his guilt and confusion over what happened, and his worry for Kaname. I didn't have any trouble following the relationships between the characters. One question I do have, is, what is a Whispered, and why does she need to be protected?
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