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Post by kellen on Oct 26, 2004 0:50:36 GMT -5
Hey all, This is the first part of my much angsted (is that a word? LoL) about Kirara pov fic. It's the first of three parts, and, if you're so inclined, I do hope you enjoy. Take care! cheers, Kellen Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/2109448/1/ |
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Post by cesmith on Nov 17, 2004 16:39:48 GMT -5
Kellen, I don't know how I missed checking this out when you first posted it. It is really quite good.  I hope you post the next part soon because I look forward to the fight scene and then the conclusion. You left off in a very exciting place.  |
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Post by kellenanne on Nov 17, 2004 17:31:14 GMT -5
(can't seem to log in for some reason)
The second part is posted; the conclusion should be up by tomorrow, barring any unfortunate RL circumstances (which I've had too much of lately!)
Thanks for the feedback! It's great to see, since this is my first foray in first person and writing from a perspective not often thought about.
cheers,Kellen
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Post by Ganheim on Nov 22, 2004 16:35:53 GMT -5
I have to agree, this is pretty good. I find it strange that I've never seen any other fics like this . . . I mean with such an intelligent Kirara. I know I already said this in my reviews for chapters 1 & 2, but... please update!  |
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Post by kellen on Nov 24, 2004 0:48:18 GMT -5
Thanks Ganheim. That's much appreciated, since I am still a bit unsure of "Failed"
cheers,Kellen
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BakaBokken the Lazy XD
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Post by BakaBokken the Lazy XD on Nov 24, 2004 17:29:14 GMT -5
Hehe, yeah, I'm too lazy to sign in...
I already left a few reviews on "Failed" over at FFnet, but I just thought I'd drop a line here and once again let you know how much I love it so far! You've done an excellent job taking a very obscure POV and bringing it to life. The details are marvelous, the characterizations (as far as I can tell) are spot on, and the action is GREAT! ^^ I can't wait for Chapter 3! Bwahahaha... ;D
Keep up the fantastic work!
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Post by BakaBokken on Jan 16, 2005 20:08:50 GMT -5
Wah! Chapter 3 was awesome! (I read it a while back, but I had to note that here... XD) What an action-packed short story! ^^ I loved every minute of it, Kellen. I can't wait to see what else you come up with now! *haunts*
Hehe... Anyway, pat yourself on the back for this one! You did an amazing job telling the story from a highly unique perspective - I think you are the -only- author I've seen use Kirara as the narrator. Excellent excellent excellent! ^^ The action was also very engaging; I had no trouble following what was going on, and it had me on the edge of my seat!
Great job all around! I will continue to love this story to pieces. ^^
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Post by slizziechan on Jan 19, 2005 0:26:14 GMT -5
Yes, Chapter three was my favorite as well.
I loved the whole she-bang.
So, Kellen, how did you get into Dog Demon fic writing?
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Post by kellen on Jan 25, 2005 0:49:15 GMT -5
Heh... A friend suggested I watch the show, and I fell in love. To make a long story short, my overactive imagination kicked in before too long. LoL
cheers,Kellen
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I hope you post the next part soon because I look forward to the fight scene and then the conclusion. You left off in a very exciting place. 
