Gravitation Stories

[Languish-Dreams]

And again, as the previous post for my Saiyuki stories, I now include a spot for my...uhh..2 Gravi stories. *L* I adore the series, so I have no doubts in my mind that I'll be writing more in this fandom.

And, once again, constructive criticism is always appreciated. Especially when it comes to keeping the characters in character. Though I take exception where it's been noted I'm MAKING them OOC. I try to do so only when it serves a purpose. But then again, I try not to do it at all. *sigh* It's a vicious cycle.

Plot bunnies are always welcomed, especially on works-in-progress. My muse doesn't always work, the lazy thing.....And I more often than not find myself beating my head against my desk in an effort to force her into coming up with anything to continue on.

Writing is a painful process.

Though I've come up with the most UNUSUAL ideas from just talking to people. Muse-y gets inspired from the strangest things....

[Terra Fire]

Well, I want to say that I really love how you left off "One Bad Week". I wonder how that one will work out. Perhaps you could bring in Ryuichi? He's always a fun character.

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~VGT~

[Terra Fire]

Also, your JALS, I really like how that's going. I stop keeping track of it for a while, and there's three more chapters! Not that I'm complaining, mind you. ;}

Well, I'm off to read the last two chapter (seeing as you just updated)

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~VGT~

[Languish-Dreams]

*cackles* Yesh, I'm afraid my inspiration for 'One Bad Week' ran dry at the worst possible time. *L* I have a few ideas on this, and Ryu was one possibility, but I can't seem to decide. hehe

And I've been having way too much fun with JALS. I can't seem to stop writing on it, it's insane. hehe But I guess if you're interested in the story, that's a good thing. *L*

[Languish-Dreams]

And just when I thought 2 gravitation fics was enough...Along comes a pardoy. Though I have to admit, I haven't gotten a reaction that strong in awhile. It was suppose to be a one-shot, but knowing me, I so doubt that. I've already got ideas brewing. eheh

If anyone's checked it out and liked it (title: 'To Kill a Fangirl') feel free to post your most annoying fangirl habits! I think Mary-Sues and Self-Inserts are next on my list....(ebil cackle)

(Harmless fun, really......muahahahaaa)

[Terra Fire]

I really like that story! As you've read my review.

Though, you know what I think? I think that you should do one for Saiyuki. Then I would be afraid.

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~VGT~

[Languish-Dreams]

A couple of ppl have said that. I might do it later, but right now I think I've got more than I can handle. *L* Some of these fics are epics right now and I doubt my brain could take on anything else until I get a few of them finished. heh

But I'll keep it in mind for later. (ebil grin)

[Languish-Dreams]

*cackles and rubs hands together in glee*

'Just Another Love Song' is coming to an end!

AHHHHH! *L*

I'm just happy. For a minute there, I thought I was going to be doomed to being unable to ending anything. *gracious sigh* My muse didn't attack this story quite as viciously as she did the others. Well, she did, but in fewer chapters. *grins*

But it's alright. Now that it's coming to an end, my dear wonderful bunny-filled muse has decided that a sequel is necessary. Interesting. She won't let me get away with ANYTHING I tell you...ANYTHING. It's one shots or epics all, I swear.

But it's fun. hehe I'm still hashing out the plot bunnies on the sequel, but if anyone would like to discuss the possibilites, feel free.

*cackles* The better to cliff-hanger you with my dears....

[Terra Fire]

Yup, sequel! I think that this story needs a sequel. Now that you got them together, we need to see what happens next. Also, we need to see more of Yuki's character. Maybe you can write the sequel in Yuki's POV? Shuichi's would be fine, but I think that we've seen enough to Shuichi's POV.

...There was something else I was going to say, but I forgot. Oh well, when I remember it, I'll come back.

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~VGT~

[Terra Fire]

Terra has a problem.


See, her computer died. So she can't use her computer at home. But T can use the computers at school. Here in lies the problem. T's school has website blocks for almost everything. They don't seem to like chapter 14 of JALS.

Soooo...

T was wondering if you could give her an overview of chapter 14?

[LD too lazy to sign in]

*L* Sure can.

I went the ebil route.

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“I can’t do this anymore.”<br>
I think my heart just stopped. Did he just say…<br>
“After three years, I let myself think that I really might love you.”<br>
Dear Lord…<br>
“But I can’t keep lying to you and myself. Not anymore.”<br>
“Are you…are you joking? Please tell me you’re joking Yuki!” I cry. I think I’m going to have a heart attack right here and now.

“Actually I am.”<br>
I feel my face meet the floor. “BASTARD!”<br>
I lift my face up when he starts laughing. God he’s so ***ed up sometimes.

“Why the hell would you do something like that?”<br>
Yuki smirks as he lights up another cigarette. “Well they say shock is good in these cases.”<br>
“These cases? What the hell are you going on about?”<br>
I think Yuki has officially lost his mind.

“You know, like a pinch.”<br>
“Huh?”<br>
“To wake up.”<br>
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Yes yesh. Shuichi was dreaming. He paid cash for his ticket, wore a disguise, and never told anyone where he was going. So for Yuki to have found him would have been...well...impossible. But it was fun to tease everyone. *L*

Shuichi leaves and gets a hotel room since he missed his return flight to Japan. The sickness, the emotional rollercoaster, everything just kind of takes over and he sleeps. A good long sleep. Like me when I have a really bad day. He wakes up to the phone and the front desk announcing he has a visitor. Having used his credit card to secure the hotel room, Shuichi isn't surprised someone showed up.

He IS surprised when that someone is Ryuichi. Brief talk, simply about whether or not Shu's done with whatever he needed to do in New York. Ryu announces he has a private plane ready to go, but insist Shu take a shower first. hehe So Shuichi heads off to the shower while Ryuichi goes to get him some clothes to wear.

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“But first Shu, you really need to take a shower.”<br>
Damn. I just knew I’d stink before the end of this.

“I’ll go get you some clothes! Jump in the shower!” he says and disappears out the door.

I’m half way in the shower when I realize that Ryuichi is getting me clothes. I can see the tight leather pants and mid-drift revealing fluffy white shirt now.

Shit.

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End of chapter! Didn't miss much, just me messing with the readers...*cackles* Hopefully, the next chapter will get finished soon.....hmm..*scampers off to write*

[Terra Fire]

Sounds good, I realy like it. I love how you put Ryu in here. He's my favorite Gravi character, very close to Yuki. Anyway, I really hope I can read the next chapter. I hate my damn computer. The one's at school aren't any better.

~VGT~

[LD Lazy girl today]

Man, it's been too long since I posted here. *L* I'm so lazy sometimes. Anyway, I just had to do a little victory dance now that 'Just Another Love Song' is over.

YAAAAAAAAAY!

And, of course, my muse has already started popping out the plot to the sequel.

Lucky me. *L*

Anyway, should any of my reviewers peek here, I'd just like to say again thank you all for reading and the wonderful comments and ideas you threw my way! I lub you all!

[Endee]

A little word about your 'Love song': you did a great job! You started with a theme/subject (?) that was a lot written about and you made it your own way... And your way is good! :-)

[Terra Fire]

Yes, just wanted to say that you did a wonderful job on JALS. I wont say it's my favorite, because I can't pick a favorite out of your stories.

Well, I have to go lay on a cold marble floor. Damn, if it's this hot in NY, just imagine how hot it is down south. It's almost 90 here. Now I remember why I hate summer. But on a good note, todays my last day of high school.

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~VGT~