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Post by Languish-Dreams on Aug 6, 2005 19:39:35 GMT -5
This is one of my all-time favorite stories right now. I love messing with these guys. *L* Anyway, I know I haven't uploaded all the original chapters yet, but I have written Chapter 16 out. And I thought it'd be nice to give a bit of a sneak peek into it. *grin*
" “First of all Seguchi, it’s none of your damn business in the first place. But if it’ll get you off my back I didn’t break him out of jail. His sentence was changed and he was released.”
“Just like that?” The keyboardist questioned.
“No not just like that. Something happened.” Yuki stated flatly.
“What?”
“Damn it Seguchi, do you want a play by play?”
Tohma smiled. “Why that would be wonderful, Eiri. Please.”
Yuki groaned. There was no way in hell he was going to stand here in the middle of the street and give Tohma a first hand account of everything that had happened since the last time he’d seen him.
It was Tatsuha, by chance, that was the first to notice something, or rather someone, was missing.
“Eiri? Tohma?”
“What the hell is it now?” the writer fumed. He was getting more than a little sick of twenty questions from his family.
“Where’s Shuichi?” "
Oh I had fun with this chapter. Muahaha! And I finally got to use my favorite weird line! "Who's your daddy?" ;D
I'm weird. I know. But since I just uploaded Chapter 9, it won't be too much longer until this is up. hehehe.
There's still the rest of Wednesday and all of Thursday to go. *evil grin*
What else can I possibly do? >=D
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Kimra Dattei dont wanna login
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Post by Kimra Dattei dont wanna login on Aug 18, 2005 0:31:37 GMT -5
posting this was really cruel and unusual punishment LD. ive been looking forward to the next chapter since, well, chapter 15 was posted. one line i know i'll be lovin' is Tohma's reply to the offer of a play-by-play. i just started laughing at that. and im really curious about that "Whos your daddy?" line.
guess i'll have to be patient and wait for the update. *heavy sigh*
can you post it already?!! sorry, patience isnt my strongest virtue. (you know i'm just kidding. take your time so its sure to be good)
Kimra Dattei
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Post by LD too lazy on Aug 18, 2005 3:34:41 GMT -5
That was mean, wasn't it? Muahahahah! *L*
At least it's getting close. I'm about to post Chapter 13. So it's not much longer. ;D
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