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Post by caiyah on Jul 10, 2006 22:23:42 GMT -5
And I am open to criticism. As long as it's honest, thoughtful and helps make the story or my writing better, I'm cool.
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Post by cesmith on Jul 12, 2006 6:15:24 GMT -5
caiyah, inspiration from Crimson's writing is never a bad thing. I have loved reading her Saiyuki stories for years, and her Weiss Kreuz ones are remarkable too. I usually forget to check the M listings so I had missed reading your story. I printed it out so I could read it at work today. 
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Post by caiyah on Jul 12, 2006 21:43:13 GMT -5
Thank you very much. The first chapter is kind of rough as most beginnings are, I like to think chapter 2 is an improvement. If you're interested I can either email it or just go ahead and post it as is and see what you think. Thanks for any criticsm and help you can provide. Let me know if you have any questions
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Post by caiyah on Jul 12, 2006 21:44:18 GMT -5
((BTW - I was inspired by the "Easy" series of Crimson's - more specifically teh last couple chapters in the sequel.))
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Post by cesmith on Jul 26, 2006 8:33:05 GMT -5
caiyah, just letting you know that I emailed the beta back to you. I look forward to more.
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