Post by KarotsaMused on Nov 5, 2004 0:19:12 GMT -5
*pouts* It's my section, I'll start another thread.
Blackjack really has me banging my head against a wall. This is what happens when you start a story with little more than a concept and hash it out as you go! However, I do love my little universe, and I -do- have a lot of ideas.
Gr. I think I'm just ranting because I'm very frustrated with it. There is much I want to get out, though...
1) Why Sanzo became a priest
1a) The influence of Komyou
1b) The protective eye in the clergy
2) Hakkai and Gojyo's breakdown
2a) They see each other once a week
2b) Hakkai knows something is up with Gojyo
2c) Natalie and the issue of reassurance
2d) We can't handle love
(This scene is already written. I didn't realize I needed it until it came out a few hours ago)
3) Gojyo and Jien
3a) How Gojyo became an orphan
3b) Where Jien went
3c) Doku's history with Kougaiji
3d) The epiphany
4) Nii's involvement
4a) Kougaiji's mother's health
5) The actual damn' plot
5a) The how and the why
5b) The survivors and the devastated
5c) How it affects (directly) uninvolved parties
C.I) Goku and the police
C.II) The Blackjack dealer
C.III) The sister and the lover
C.IV) The Priest
C.V) The mother
C.VI) The Incarcerated
6) Homura's redemption
6a) Karot watches way too much Cowboy Bebop
7) Sanzo and Goku thumbing their noses at the church
7a) The question of priesthood
7b) The question of finances
7c) The question of visitors and double beds
8) Reno and Doku
8a) Dallas
9) Yaone and Kougaiji
9a) The ring
9b) Protectiveness issues
B.I) Nii
B.II) Gyuumaoh
B.III) Ren
Hm. Am I forgetting anything? You see why I'm frustrated? I have a lot that is jockeying to get out and a very small bottleneck to get my ducks in a row. But if anybody sees a hole I've yet to fill (no bad unrequited passion jokes, please) ... HELP!
Also, if anybody would be so kind as to check over that Hakkai-and-Gojyo scene, I'd be appreciative like crazy. I know that while it's complete, it's only three-fifths finished. If that.
Blackjack really has me banging my head against a wall. This is what happens when you start a story with little more than a concept and hash it out as you go! However, I do love my little universe, and I -do- have a lot of ideas.
Gr. I think I'm just ranting because I'm very frustrated with it. There is much I want to get out, though...
1) Why Sanzo became a priest
1a) The influence of Komyou
1b) The protective eye in the clergy
2) Hakkai and Gojyo's breakdown
2a) They see each other once a week
2b) Hakkai knows something is up with Gojyo
2c) Natalie and the issue of reassurance
2d) We can't handle love
(This scene is already written. I didn't realize I needed it until it came out a few hours ago)
3) Gojyo and Jien
3a) How Gojyo became an orphan
3b) Where Jien went
3c) Doku's history with Kougaiji
3d) The epiphany
4) Nii's involvement
4a) Kougaiji's mother's health
5) The actual damn' plot
5a) The how and the why
5b) The survivors and the devastated
5c) How it affects (directly) uninvolved parties
C.I) Goku and the police
C.II) The Blackjack dealer
C.III) The sister and the lover
C.IV) The Priest
C.V) The mother
C.VI) The Incarcerated
6) Homura's redemption
6a) Karot watches way too much Cowboy Bebop
7) Sanzo and Goku thumbing their noses at the church
7a) The question of priesthood
7b) The question of finances
7c) The question of visitors and double beds
8) Reno and Doku
8a) Dallas
9) Yaone and Kougaiji
9a) The ring
9b) Protectiveness issues
B.I) Nii
B.II) Gyuumaoh
B.III) Ren
Hm. Am I forgetting anything? You see why I'm frustrated? I have a lot that is jockeying to get out and a very small bottleneck to get my ducks in a row. But if anybody sees a hole I've yet to fill (no bad unrequited passion jokes, please) ... HELP!
Also, if anybody would be so kind as to check over that Hakkai-and-Gojyo scene, I'd be appreciative like crazy. I know that while it's complete, it's only three-fifths finished. If that.