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Post by BakaBokken on Aug 20, 2004 11:58:35 GMT -5
Post here if you'd like to discuss one of my completed works with me. So far, the only completed work I have is "Complications", my Inuyasha one-shot. ;D
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Post by kanshu on Aug 21, 2004 0:37:12 GMT -5
I've read through that story, and found it well written. However... You change from narrative to "I" somewhere in the middle. That disjoints the reading experience. Also, I had a bit of a problem 'hearing' Inuyasha's voice when reading through his musings. The... heart (in lacl of better words) was missing somehow. That's a first impression. I will have to read through it again... later.
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Post by BakaBokken on Aug 21, 2004 22:29:46 GMT -5
Thank you for the feedback, OptiMoose! ;D
I actually wrote "Complications" a while ago before I started changing my style, and I've been planning on doing a full revision at some point. I'll keep your suggestion in mind when I revisit it!
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Post by BakaBokken on Jan 16, 2005 19:58:35 GMT -5
Heh, now that I've finished another story, might as well note it here! ^^
"A Strong Will" (Rurouni Kenshin) was my first fanfiction ever, and so it's fitting that it's the first multi-chapter fanfic I finish. ^^ I'm in the process of rewriting it, since I feel a lot of the earlier chapters could use revision. XP
Anyway, that's about it for now! ;D
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Post by treneka on Jan 17, 2005 1:12:22 GMT -5
*presents bottle of champagne*throws confetti*
CONGRATULATIONS! I think it's wonderful you've finished a multi-chapter fiction! That's tough. I still haven't managed it. Anyway, could you post a link to it for us lazy people out here?
*pats on back*positively glows with envy*
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Post by kitsama on Jan 22, 2005 16:14:56 GMT -5
I've read both your completed fanfics and I loved them both. But you really enjoy hurting the characters don't you? That's what make your stories so additive. We never know if your going to put them out of their misery or not. ;D
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Post by BakaBokken on Jan 26, 2005 4:53:36 GMT -5
LoL, thanks, Kitsama! XD Yes, I do have a nasty tendency to harm the characters, but it's all for plot purposes, I promise! ^^; (I'm trying to break the habit, I swear! T_T But it's so hard writing something without giving the main characters a bad time, ne? :3) Oh, and for treneka, I'll post the links to these two completed ones... (I'm lazy, so I'll only post the FFnet links here. XP) "A Strong Will" (Rurouni Kenshin, PG-13) 15 chapters + Epilogue (I'll be removing the Prologue with the rewrite) www.fanfiction.net/s/1740803/1/"Complications" (Inuyasha, G) One-shot. www.fanfiction.net/s/1749535/1/
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