CH:M? chapter 11

[kanshu]

Nice saying, Me-Nuriko.

If tastes weren't different, then life would be much more boring. And no one would ever feel the need to complain, or feel irritated, or start thinking...

The art is to keep the butt together despite it being devided... that's what "spine" is for

[cesmith]

Sorry for the delay of this review. I promised it to you quite a while ago. Finally I am keeping my word.

Chapter 11 was quite good. My only complaint is that it meant your story was finished.

Tomi is lucky I'm not the judge. I'm not as forgiving as The Judge and Hakkai are. Part of me doesn't want her to get off so easily. Unlike Hakkai, her crime was not in a moment of passion or insanity. Her's was planned years later. Also, unlike Hakkai, she was still making excuses for her actions instead of accepting the guilt and consequences that go with her actions.

While the Inn scene between Hakkai and Gojyo wasn't nesecary to the story, it works beautifully with or without it, for me it was a re-affirmation of the love Hakkai and Gojyo feel for each other. The campfire scene was sweet and tender, emotionally. The Inn scene was the physical display of their love, It expressed their defiance of Fate and the possibility that one of them might die before the journey is over.

I especially liked the ending. The Deja Vu of the morning for Gojyo. The apprehension he first felt upon hearing almost the same words that he had heard in the begining of the story and then the amusement when he realized it was Sanz's turn in the Hot Spot.

[cesmith]

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;D ;D ;D ;D HAPPY BIRTHDAY ;D ;D ;D ;D
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[cesmith]

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;D ;D ;D ;D CONGRATULATIONS ;D ;D ;D
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ON GRADUATING ;D ;D ;D
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[Salmastryon]

Congrats from me too! ;D

Though I think cesmith has outdone me in exhilarates.

[Me-Nuriko]

Thanks! Everybody is being so nice.