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Post by kanshu on Nov 3, 2004 12:20:52 GMT -5
Well, there was a tiny little bit of progress today, so. Not to mention that I got a review where someone declared that Doku raped Gojyo. Mmm...
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Post by Ookami on Nov 3, 2004 13:26:26 GMT -5
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Post by kanshu on Nov 3, 2004 14:31:10 GMT -5
Indeed. ;D Of course, we all know that Doku would never do such a thing to his little brother, riiight? Or... would he? Oh, all the unanswered questions. ;D
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Post by cesmith on Nov 4, 2004 7:36:24 GMT -5
A tease without a tease. Not fair. We really need a pouting smilie and not just a sad one! ;D
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Post by kanshu on Nov 8, 2004 7:31:07 GMT -5
A tease. You still want more tease? Tsk.
Tease enough? ;D
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Post by cesmith on Nov 8, 2004 7:43:09 GMT -5
You should know I'm never happy until the chapter comes out. ;D I know, I'm terrible. *sheepish grin*
Oh, Hakkai....can't wait...fangirly giggles and *swoons*.
Ok, today I need to be put away in a padded cell... It's Monday morning, do I need any other excuse?
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Post by Salmastryon on Nov 8, 2004 12:54:35 GMT -5
That really brightened my day ;D
SO sorry I missed you yesterday *huggles*
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Post by kanshu on Nov 11, 2004 2:33:00 GMT -5
It seems that you'll (really!) see an update of the story this weekend. I'm at 3200 words right now and the last scene of the chapter is almost finished (keep your fingers crossed for the lunch break ;D). Then, just a little bit fine tuning... (hides back in the shadows of work, testing and schooling people)
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Post by Blood_Debt on Nov 11, 2004 3:14:00 GMT -5
Must. Read. Chapter. I believe my sanity hinges on it *runs around like a headless chicken* If finger crossing is what does it, my toes are in too... I think my temperature has done something to my brain. *sniffle*
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Post by kanshu on Nov 11, 2004 8:05:23 GMT -5
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Post by Salmastryon on Nov 11, 2004 8:12:54 GMT -5
oooo!!!
*me goes reads since I've got nothing to do at work today except be a traffic light.*
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Post by Me-Nuriko on Nov 11, 2004 9:53:27 GMT -5
Yay! It was a wonderful chapter! (No surprise about it being wonderful, though. ) I left a somewhat incoherent review at ff.net. I'm not very good at express what I think is good or bad, but I couldn't find anything bad, so it doesn't matter. ;D What matters is the feeling your stories make me feel. I'm feeling warm and happy, and I want more! I wonder if your stories or addictive? Maybe I can't function normally wihtout my dose? (That's why we need the teasers, between the chapters.) Guess this was quite incoherent, too, but I'm sure you got that I love it.
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Post by Salmastryon on Nov 11, 2004 9:59:37 GMT -5
;D Much happiness. I so enjoy reading this story. I know it is an excellant piece of fiction because it grabs me and sucks me under into the minds and universe of the characters. I so love when that happens. ;D
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Post by cesmith on Nov 11, 2004 22:54:26 GMT -5
Ohh, this story is absolutely wonderful. Me-Nuriko, I think you are right. OptiMoose's stories are addictive and even a chapter as wonderful as this only makes me want even more. What a cliffhanger. Hakkai on the ground unable to move, Gojyo in fear of returning to Konchen and Sanzo, somehow, speaking up for Gojyo. You've given us a small sample of the horrors Konchen put Sanzo and Gojyo through. Was it the same for Hakkai and Goku? Still no answers to whether Doku caused Gojyo's injuries. And Sanzo's reaction to his helping Gojyo. "Oh, Crap!" A perfect summing up of the trouble he might have just put himself into. I've said it before and I'll say it again. I almost never read this story because it is an AU. I remember trying it out because I had enjoyed "Simply Love" so much. But I was hooked from that first chapter and each one only keeps getting better. It is truly hard waiting for the next chapter and Me-Nuriko is right, we need regular teases to help us make it until the completed chapter is posted. You helped me realize that an AU story can be as wonderful as the regular Saiyuki universe. I feel torn between your 2 stories. When I read "Simply Love", all I want is the next chapter of the story. Then I read "Slaves of Fate" and I want the next chapter of that story to be written. It is your writing ability that enables us to enjoy these 2 stories so much. And to crave more. OK. Enough praise. Time to go back to work and write the next chapter of ?? I bet either story would be fine since you have such EVIL cliffhangers for both of them. ;D
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Post by kanshu on Nov 12, 2004 3:28:24 GMT -5
*blushes bright red* Oi, you want to make my head swell and explode? Salma, Me-Nuriko, cesmith: THANK YOU! *huggles* It's so much praise that it almost makes me feel uncomfortable. I mean, it's not... proper. It's just an ordinary story, nothing great, and it has so much room for improvement. *sigh* I'm not making any sense, do I? *hides in closet* In any case, I'm very happy that you like 'Slaves'. I'm also very happy you like 'Simply Love'. I think I'll continue writing on 'Love' next, because 'Slaves' is a lot of emotional struggle to write. Besides, I think we all want to find out if Goku survived, right?
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