Inuyasha FanFic Idea

[Terra Fire]

I have this Inuyasha fanfic idea that's going no where in this little brain of mine. Perhaps someone can take it off my hands and work with it...

[kanshu]

Uhh... how about giving a bit more detailed information? Like, main characters, plot summary, genre, problems you encountered, etc?

Mind reading has not been invented so far

[Terra Fire]

I did it again, I'm quite lacking in specifics lately. Sorry about that, You'll have to excuse me.

Anyway, the plot that I have is about Kagome not going to the past and freeing Inuyasha from the sacred tree. Eventually they get attacked by the centipede youkai, than Kagome frees him. It's almost parallel to the series. Meanwhile, however, there's a war going on Between Naraku and Sesshomaru. I know, it's a bit complicated, and me having no sleep for two days, isn't helping. Though, I have a bit of it on my ff.net bio, if anyone would like to take a look at it.

www.fanfiction.net/~vgterra


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[Salmastryon]

Let me just see if I got this straight in my drug addled brain.

The current setting is the present. Naraku and Sesshomaru are currently engaged in a war. So, I assume the populous in the present day is somewhat aware of youkai. Kagome has obviosly been raised as a miko at her family temple.

At some point Kagome pokes her nose into the shrine around the sacred tree and can see our favorite hanyou imprisoned there. Plot ensues.

Damn you! You're as bad as Optimoose -.- While you definitely have some more background to fill out that is a good plot bunny. You should definitely write it!

Though if I may make a suggestion? Instead of try to make it parallel the series closely. It might work better if youexplore how things would work out differently and only keep the major plot points. You could even twist the plot points around to reflect how the universe is different.

If you want help ironing out background details I already have a large list of questions piling up in my head ^^;

[Terra Fire]

I would love that. As much as I try, I can't seem to get things through. I've been so preoccupied with everything else, that I hadn't any motivation to start this again. I got so frustrated over it, but I didn't want to see it go to waste. I got the first chapter down, and a very, very cut-and-dry plot going, but other than that, my mind keeps going elsewhere. I could e-mail you the entire first chapter to make more sense, if you would like?

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[Salmastryon]

Sure you can do that. I don't mind.

[e-mail]

Though... I've been told that I'm a strict editor, so if you could give me some guidelines on how far you want my constructive critism to go?
On the help figuring out the plot, send me a copy of what you got so far. I'm really good at coming up with questions ;D

To start with though I've got these questions:

What are Naraku and Sesshomaru fighting about?

How does Kagome know she's the reincarnation?

To what extent is the public aware of the youkai?

Hope I'm not being too pushy. This is just a really cool idea.

[Ganheim]

I haven't had a lot of time for anything on the internet, and a lot of that time has been taken up with critiquing other people's stories (or posting Wormhole). Anyway, while critiquing, I mentioned Mouryoumaru. The author of whose story I had been working on asked who the character was, so I went back and re-read the chapters involving him (starting at chapter 339 I believe).

As I was going through the chapters, I noticed some similarities between him and Kagura, and this plot idea started to surface in my little mind: what if Mouryoumaru wasn't the willing menace he's thought to be? What if he's as hateful of Naraku and eager to be rid of him as Kagura?

So, to get straight to my idea: what if Mouryoumaru rebelled?